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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Aug 5, 2008 10:41:36 GMT -5
Oh and PS LordDontNoelMeNow,
If you're writing an article you need a thesis statement. You need your points to connect to the thesis. And you need a conclusion. What I'm trying to say is that whenever you write something you need a purpose, points, and a direction (where is this all going?)
So cheers for everyone picking up on his spelling errors, cause when I skimmed through it the first time, I didn't notice. But I did notice that the article lacks everything that a piece of writing should have.
Oh, and if that article is truly within the top 5 of the RS reviews, then I fear for the company because that would mean they have some pretty bad writers.
You just keep digging yourself deeper.
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Post by 1manband on Aug 5, 2008 10:42:25 GMT -5
Nice one LDNMN, keep the news rolling in! Some of use do appreciate news that does not come from a batman villian/professional wrestler.
and for everyone that keeps bitching, just dont read it if it bothers you that much, its like a 6th grade dance on this forum sometimes, too much drama...
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Post by tomlivesforever on Aug 5, 2008 10:43:06 GMT -5
Spot on mate. And yup, I see your sarcasm as you rightfully allude to the fact that LordDontNoelMeNow wrote this. He's so thick it's unbelievable. Not only can he not write properly, but he tries to use his poor writing ability to attempt to trick us - strategically an epic fail. If you suck at writing, then why did he believe making up a review would work? Idiot. At least spell check the article first! LordDon'tNoelMeNow should change his name to WebbyDontBanMeNow because at the rate of his bullshit, he's gonna get banned. Tosser y'know, it's almost as if he's doing it on purpose now... as if he knows that we will jump all over him ...  ;D If he is doing it on purpose, you lot have certainly taken the bait. |
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Post by lorddontnoelmenow on Aug 5, 2008 10:44:24 GMT -5
Oh and PS LordDontNoelMeNow, If you're writing an article you need a thesis statement. You need your points to connect to the thesis. And you need a conclusion. What I'm trying to say is that whenever you write something you need a purpose, points, and a direction (where is this all going?) So cheers for everyone picking up on his spelling errors, cause when I skimmed through it the first time, I didn't notice. But I did notice that the article lacks everything that a piece of writing should have. Oh, and if that article is truly within the top 5 of the RS reviews, then I fear for the company because that would mean they have some pretty bad writers. You just keep digging yourself deeper. you obviously havent learned yet that what they teach you in school is not used in the real world on another note, it looks like i will be able to post another unused review shortly |
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Post by 32shutout on Aug 5, 2008 10:46:17 GMT -5
Oh and PS LordDontNoelMeNow, If you're writing an article you need a thesis statement. You need your points to connect to the thesis. And you need a conclusion. What I'm trying to say is that whenever you write something you need a purpose, points, and a direction (where is this all going?) So cheers for everyone picking up on his spelling errors, cause when I skimmed through it the first time, I didn't notice. But I did notice that the article lacks everything that a piece of writing should have. Oh, and if that article is truly within the top 5 of the RS reviews, then I fear for the company because that would mean they have some pretty bad writers. You just keep digging yourself deeper. you obviously havent learned yet that what they teach you in school is not used in the real world on another note, it looks like i will be able to post another unused review shortly Today? |
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Post by bwilder on Aug 5, 2008 10:46:18 GMT -5
Post it!
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Aug 5, 2008 10:46:48 GMT -5
That's such a bad review. I don't mean that it sounds like whoever wrote it gave it a bad review, I mean it's poorly written. The "review" is all over the place, and doesn't reach any sort of conclusion. I can see why it would be "unused" However, that's not enough, the person should be fired for making such a terrible effort. But oh, wait, what's that? This is completely irrelevant because no one at RS wrote this. This was written by our feeble "friend" LordIMakeUpReviewsNow. How convenient it was "unused" seeing that no one will ever be able to verify and, and let's not forget it really is a poor article. Get a life mate. You slating absolutley anyone who posts info about the new album has actually become more boring than the people starting the topics. It might be real, it might not. Just take it or leave it. I never slated TheRiddler, cos he was at least credible, as he posted something that was later verified to be true. I slate these idiots now because I can see through their bullshit, as 99% of the people on here can. The fact that you can't see he's shitting you is rather sad. Twoface - were we right to slate him? Yes. How about Robbin? Yup, him too. And John Cena? Damn right, dawg. The list goes on and on, it's just pathetic that LDNMN is the current member to be acting like an utter tool |
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Post by 32shutout on Aug 5, 2008 10:49:20 GMT -5
You slating absolutley anyone who posts info about the new album has actually become more boring than the people starting the topics. It might be real, it might not. Just take it or leave it. I never slated TheRiddler, cos he was at least credible, as he posted something that was later verified to be true. I slate these idiots now because I can see through their bullshit, as 99% of the people on here can. The fact that you can't see he's shitting you is rather sad. Twoface - were we right to slate him? Yes. How about Robbin? Yup, him too. And John Cena? Damn right, dawg. The list goes on and on, it's just pathetic that LDNMN is the current member to be acting like an utter tool Your forgetting all the people you slated b/f they were proven to be true, such as oneexcitedyoungman and theriddler- lorddon'tnoelmenow may or may not be bullshitting you, but you don't really know either way... just let it play out, ignore it if it bothers you |
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Post by tomlivesforever on Aug 5, 2008 10:49:37 GMT -5
You slating absolutley anyone who posts info about the new album has actually become more boring than the people starting the topics. It might be real, it might not. Just take it or leave it. I never slated TheRiddler, cos he was at least credible, as he posted something that was later verified to be true. I slate these idiots now because I can see through their bullshit, as 99% of the people on here can. The fact that you can't see he's shitting you is rather sad. Twoface - were we right to slate him? Yes. How about Robbin? Yup, him too. And John Cena? Damn right, dawg. The list goes on and on, it's just pathetic that LDNMN is the current member to be acting like an utter tool There is some obvious bullshit i agree like john cena, but why do you feel the need to respond over pages and pages when it is quite obviouly shit. This may not be, why hasn't it been move in to the playpen? |
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Aug 5, 2008 10:50:38 GMT -5
Oh and PS LordDontNoelMeNow, If you're writing an article you need a thesis statement. You need your points to connect to the thesis. And you need a conclusion. What I'm trying to say is that whenever you write something you need a purpose, points, and a direction (where is this all going?) So cheers for everyone picking up on his spelling errors, cause when I skimmed through it the first time, I didn't notice. But I did notice that the article lacks everything that a piece of writing should have. Oh, and if that article is truly within the top 5 of the RS reviews, then I fear for the company because that would mean they have some pretty bad writers. You just keep digging yourself deeper. you obviously havent learned yet that what they teach you in school is not used in the real world on another note, it looks like i will be able to post another unused review shortly 1.) Post another unsuded review shortly? No shit, you're sitting there writing it now, dumb ass. This time, try to be smarter with how you write it. 2.) What's taught in school isn't used in the real world? You really are dumb. I hope for your sake you're not older than 20. Learning how to write is one of the most important abilities to have - ESPECIALLY IF YOU'RE WORKING AT A MAGAZINE COMPANY. I don't think RS would hire you if you told them you didn't know how to write. You're the most dense person I have ever stumbled upon. |
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Post by liamg4life on Aug 5, 2008 10:50:49 GMT -5
You slating absolutley anyone who posts info about the new album has actually become more boring than the people starting the topics. It might be real, it might not. Just take it or leave it. I never slated TheRiddler, cos he was at least credible, as he posted something that was later verified to be true. I slate these idiots now because I can see through their bullshit, as 99% of the people on here can. The fact that you can't see he's shitting you is rather sad. Twoface - were we right to slate him? Yes. How about Robbin? Yup, him too. And John Cena? Damn right, dawg. The list goes on and on, it's just pathetic that LDNMN is the current member to be acting like an utter tool do us all a favor then and dont slag him off anymore..he said that Waiting for the Raputre was writen by andy and the songs that noel sings. lets see if that is true. if he is true then you wont be slagging him off, if it is true we will all be kicking his ass |
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Post by nhr57 on Aug 5, 2008 10:51:40 GMT -5
There are four logical loop holes here:
1. Why does someone with such a poor grasp of language venture into journalism, and how does that person become successful?
2. Everybody writes a review of every album and the best one is selected? I don't know how they work at RS, but this is very odd and unheard of elsewhere (afaik).
3. So they submit the reviews, the boss reads them and selects the best one. If we choose to believe that, then the boss knows who wrote this and decided to leak it. Not a wise career move one would think.
4. Why isn't this in the play pen?
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Post by 32shutout on Aug 5, 2008 10:53:29 GMT -5
4. Why isn't this in the play pen? Notice his thread about hearing the album isn't in the playpen either |
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Post by idledreamer on Aug 5, 2008 10:53:42 GMT -5
Oh and PS LordDontNoelMeNow, If you're writing an article you need a thesis statement. You need your points to connect to the thesis. And you need a conclusion. What I'm trying to say is that whenever you write something you need a purpose, points, and a direction (where is this all going?) So cheers for everyone picking up on his spelling errors, cause when I skimmed through it the first time, I didn't notice. But I did notice that the article lacks everything that a piece of writing should have. Oh, and if that article is truly within the top 5 of the RS reviews, then I fear for the company because that would mean they have some pretty bad writers. You just keep digging yourself deeper. you obviously havent learned yet that what they teach you in school is not used in the real world on another note, it looks like i will be able to post another unused review shortly yes, please post it , i need a good laugh when i get home from work  and please, don't proofread the next one either |
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Post by liamg4life on Aug 5, 2008 10:53:47 GMT -5
Where will all the doubters go when lorddontnoelmenow is proven to be accurate on every single thing he has presented to this forum? i think this is great, we now know who wrote what songs, who sings what songs...if its all true |
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Post by curlies on Aug 5, 2008 10:56:34 GMT -5
4. Why isn't this in the play pen? Notice his thread about hearing the album isn't in the playpen either Just coz it's not about a leak. |
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Post by mercury3164 on Aug 5, 2008 10:56:37 GMT -5
you're a damned fool if you think this crap is real... absolute rubbish.
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Post by 32shutout on Aug 5, 2008 10:59:50 GMT -5
Notice his thread about hearing the album isn't in the playpen either Just coz it's not about a leak. Maybe, idk |
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Aug 5, 2008 11:01:50 GMT -5
I never slated TheRiddler, cos he was at least credible, as he posted something that was later verified to be true. I slate these idiots now because I can see through their bullshit, as 99% of the people on here can. The fact that you can't see he's shitting you is rather sad. Twoface - were we right to slate him? Yes. How about Robbin? Yup, him too. And John Cena? Damn right, dawg. The list goes on and on, it's just pathetic that LDNMN is the current member to be acting like an utter tool There is some obvious bullshit i agree like john cena, but why do you feel the need to respond over pages and pages when it is quite obviouly shit. This may not be, why hasn't it been move in to the playpen? You're delusional if you think there's even the slighestt bit of truth in this thread, or in anything this clown has said for that matter. You know someone is lying when they can't keep their own story straight (hence why criminals get found out) 1.) I listened to the album once, I can't remember anything 2.) I don't know any lyrics 3.) Here's the lyrics for "Soldier On" 4.) I have all the lyrics to each song, but won't release them 5.) TSOTL is catchy but doesn't have much of a chorus 5.) I can't remember how the catchy part of TSOTL goes ^ What an utter mess of contradictions Now lets sum up everything that's wrong with this specific thread: 1.) "Unused" Review - Thus we can NEVER verify it, so he attempted to cover his own ass from the get go 2.) Spelling Errors - Zack instead of Zak, 'Y' instead of 'y' etc....A journalist at RS wouldn't even have made those errors, and if they did would have caught them when they read it over 3.) Poorly Written: There's not one single point - A review needs to have points, to have an argument, 3a.) Poorly Written: No Conclusion - The review doesn't even have a conclusion. It's not even a review then! It's just random sentences strung together -> lacks direction, lacks a purpose. A journalist at RS hasn't written this, because I know that I could do even better, and I'm still in College. 4.) He just said he's gonna post another "unused review" (may have already done so before Im able to post this)....I wonder why that is? hmm....Because he's obviously writing it right now.... LDNMN can keep spreading his lies, but what adds fuel to the flame is how people like you try to keep an open mind in thinking he may be credible. You know deep down he isn't so say it. And if you do believe him, then you're clearly not thinking properly. |
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Post by curlies on Aug 5, 2008 11:03:57 GMT -5
Right... and "Any Bell" is the new Oasis bassist.
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Post by Guigsy on Aug 5, 2008 11:09:25 GMT -5
i have been given permision from the author of this review to "share" with my "friends" as she put it. this review will not be used by RS enjoy ________________________________________________ As I sat down to hear the new album by Oasis I can honestly say I did not expect much. The fact is, their last 3 albums(Don’t Believe The Truth, Heathen Chemistry, and Standing On The Shoulder Of Giants) were nothing to write home about. The Gallagher brothers known for their on and off stage fighting trick you with their new album “Dig Out Your Soul”. As the opening track “Bag it Up” Comes at you with a drum and bass line right out of the Chemical Brothers closet you’ll find that this is not an ordinary Oasis album. With guitarist Gem Archer and Bassist Andy Bell filling their roles nicely Noel Gallagher has allowed them to write the two best songs on the album. “Waiting for the Rapture” is by far the strongest song on the album. As Liam sings “I’m waiting for the rapture alone in my soul tonight” you find yourself thinking “who is this great band?” The sharing of vocal duties on “Dig Out Your Soul” again shows you that Oasis’s best singer may just be Noel. The Song “Falling Down” shows some of his best song writing efforts in years. Dave Sardy’s presence is strongly felt as song after song reveals stronger and stronger bass lines from Any Bell. Drumming on “Dig Out Your Soul” is done by Zack Starkey(Yes that’s Ringo’s son). And by the way; what’s an anti war song doing on the album? Your girlfriend/wife is probably enormous |
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Post by youvegottohide on Aug 5, 2008 11:10:13 GMT -5
Notorious L.4.E. Wins
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Post by supersonic1983 on Aug 5, 2008 11:12:04 GMT -5
But there's a first time for everything. ;D
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Post by lorddontnoelmenow on Aug 5, 2008 11:12:59 GMT -5
i didn't know there was supposed to be a winner?  in that case. let me know what happens when they tell who wrote each track. |
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Post by Winston Churchill on Aug 5, 2008 11:13:00 GMT -5
Notorious L.4.E., grow up.
I hardly post here, but if your really that upset by it then get off these forums. Your the one adding fuel to the flame.
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