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Post by jakecosenza on Jul 27, 2009 23:44:15 GMT -5
Well, Actually I Made It.... What do You think?
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Post by mkoasis on Jul 28, 2009 1:35:13 GMT -5
Looks a bit like a grade school project...a very cool one though, mind you. Nice effort
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Post by mkoasis on Jul 28, 2009 1:35:51 GMT -5
On second though, it reminds me of Weller's 22 Dreams.
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Post by bathqueen on Jul 28, 2009 1:36:56 GMT -5
The writing isnt close enough to the DOYS font. And the fruit basket...its just...No.
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Jul 28, 2009 2:00:54 GMT -5
Not to be a dick, but the opening line begins with "eyes over the city" - why is this picture focused on the beach? Granted cities can be beaches, but that's not the impression I get from the song.....
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Post by LlAM on Jul 28, 2009 2:14:34 GMT -5
Not to be a dick, but the opening line begins with "eyes over the city" - why is this picture focused on the beach? Granted cities can be beaches, but that's not the impression I get from the song..... I agree. It doesn't compliment the song.
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Post by NoelsNotebook on Jul 28, 2009 3:09:58 GMT -5
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Post by matt on Jul 28, 2009 8:51:48 GMT -5
Not to be a dick, but the opening line begins with "eyes over the city" - why is this picture focused on the beach? Granted cities can be beaches, but that's not the impression I get from the song..... Yeah, but the lyrics in practically all DOYS songs mean fuck all, so it doesn't really matter. I mean, AATW had a beach on the front cover.
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Post by bathqueen on Jul 28, 2009 11:05:28 GMT -5
Not to be a dick, but the opening line begins with "eyes over the city" - why is this picture focused on the beach? Granted cities can be beaches, but that's not the impression I get from the song..... Yeah, but the lyrics in practically all DOYS songs mean fuck all, so it doesn't really matter. I mean, AATW had a beach on the front cover. yeh, but the idea there was the writing in the sand, not "a beach", this one has a "beach" atmosphere to it, and then u have that pineapple next to it....there are no ukleles in TT know what i mean..........?
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Jul 28, 2009 11:25:19 GMT -5
Not to be a dick, but the opening line begins with "eyes over the city" - why is this picture focused on the beach? Granted cities can be beaches, but that's not the impression I get from the song..... Yeah, but the lyrics in practically all DOYS songs mean fuck all, so it doesn't really matter. I mean, AATW had a beach on the front cover. FFS, not this again. BIU, WFT, IOT, FD, TBWTL all have meaning.....SO is simplictic, but that too hass meaning.....and I'm sure you can twist something from TT, too DOYS songs mean fuck all? Get out of here.
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Post by lampard on Jul 28, 2009 11:38:28 GMT -5
solid effort, considering that you had to make that from scratch.
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Post by His Royal Majesty Revolver on Jul 28, 2009 12:30:00 GMT -5
Yeah, back on topic, I like it. It seems pretty interesting. I could only view the small image though, as the larger one wouldn't load for some reason
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Post by Beady’s Here Now on Jul 28, 2009 12:37:37 GMT -5
It's too freaking happy. TT has a very dark undertone. Would have been cool if you somehow found a non-tacky way to depict 'eyes over the city'.
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Post by Nyron Nosworthy on Jul 28, 2009 13:31:35 GMT -5
The Turning is a very summery song though. You're being very harsh on the lad, it's a good effort although the font and logo should stand out more.
Does it really matter anyway? It's obviously something he's done for a laugh, nothing more.
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Post by His Royal Majesty Revolver on Jul 28, 2009 15:16:29 GMT -5
yeah, it's not like that song would ever be a single anyhow - they'd probably being playing the song live or something...
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Post by Level 03 on Jul 28, 2009 17:17:36 GMT -5
Some nice ideas... But you need to work a lot on the composition.
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Post by LlAM on Jul 29, 2009 3:09:28 GMT -5
The Turning is a very summery song though. You're being very harsh on the lad, it's a good effort although the font and logo should stand out more. Does it really matter anyway? It's obviously something he's done for a laugh, nothing more. He asked for our opinions.........................................................!
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